英訳唐澤心経 (43)

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1 グナマーナ正大師 2015/07/31(金) 17:45:18 ID:GGLgEs22

原文に則って単語並べるだけにするか迷ったが結局意味を重視して所々文章にしたやで
英語に自信ニキ修正求む
Karasawa Heart Sutra

Takahiro Karasawa idolater lawyer incompetent incompetent
disclosure disclosure mistaken disclosure IP address clip-clop
subsequently fired nuclear weapons to posters and blasted them to kingdom come
after all the Guru is No.1 after all the Guru is No.1

Karasawa Gotanda poop machine
disciple of Aum, sarin manufacturer, levitation
robbing Chinfe of three hundred thousand yen, cumming inside Iiniku Ushijima,
Takahiro is going to attend the Momoclo concert, nariyo

plain heart like snow Koushin Lawfirm
deals with several litigation to the best of his ability
in his youth, murdered his brother, which was the root of all what he has done
"I am powerless. Why am I powerless?" It was law that I finally came across.

Drop dead, drop dead, Karasawa, Drop dead, drop dead, Karasawa
incompetent clip-clop lawyer, Karasawa Koran burner
dependent on his father, to put it bluntly Karasawa is incompetent
I hope for Takahiro Karasawa's resignation as lawyer from the bottom of my heart.

2 グナマーナ正大師 2015/07/31(金) 17:54:59 ID:fnsBNS.2

いまは名前を姓名逆にしなくてもいいことになってるからKarasawa Takahiroでいいと思う

3 グナマーナ正大師 2015/07/31(金) 18:09:19 ID:JVqyaXYM

さっと見るだけで全部頭に入ってきて麻
やっぱり唐澤心経って名曲だわ

4 グナマーナ正大師 2015/07/31(金) 18:10:50 ID:99oHOjyc

尊師の発言は日本語として既に怪しいが英訳出来るだろうか

5 グナマーナ正大師 2015/07/31(金) 18:12:28 ID:tCg8DYTQ

15 :グナマーナ正大師:2015/05/17(日) 02:43:27 ID:nVa16fyI
まず初めに書いて置きますが僕は英語を書くのは得意ではないので読みにくかったらもうしわけありません

Karasawa Takahiro idol geek lawyer lame duck lame duck
Disclosuring mistaken disclosing IP paka paka
Shoot nuke after disclosing; he ended his life fully
Indeed Sonshi is No.1 Indeed Sonshi is No.1
Karasawa Gotanda Dukie making machine
Aum cultist Poison gas maker Mid-air floater
Usurpation to 3000 dollar Creampie to Iiniku
Takahiro go to Momokuro's live
Soshin-Jakusetsu Degital-tatoo Koushin-lawfirm
Giving multiple litigation all of his
Missing brother in his youth is all of starting point
I am helpless Why am I helpless I met law in fainally
Drop dead Karasawa drop dead Karasawa
Lam duck pakapaka lawyer; Quran burner
Idiot that mooch off one's parents I say to outspoken Karasawa is lame duck
I hope that Karasawa give up lawyer very sincerely and seriously

6 グナマーナ正大師 (sage) 2015/07/31(金) 18:34:33 ID:EyGifpXg

In how parents, in how family were you grown?
When did you start to do that?
What kind of student were you?
What were you watching in your school days?
What color was the sky?
Have you cried?
What happend to you?
Have you felt to be loved by your parents?
How did you feel when you announced to kill me?
What kind of pleasure did you feel?
Could you look the policemen who came suddenly in the eye?
Did you see your parents' face at that time?
Do you know the grief of your parents?
What did you feel when you were spending the night alone?
What did you feel from persuasion of lawey who defenced you?
What are you feeling now?
Can you feel your parents' feelings?
Are you the person who hurts the other?
Can you kill your parents?
Can people become happy with hurting other?
What are you seeing now?
What color is the sky?
People must love each other.
You must feel to be loved by parents.
Now, your life restarts.
What kind of member of society will you become?
I want you to be not a person who hurts others but a person who helps others.
I can see you at 20 years later.

7 グナマーナ正大師 2015/07/31(金) 19:15:46 ID:GGLgEs22

>>2
Karasawa Takahiroの持つ清澄な響きも逆にしたら台無しだからこれは修正したほうがいいな
>>5
単語選びがどこかこなれており、韻律をできる限り崩さないようにする配慮も読み取れ、身が震える。
人生終了は核を打ち込まれた側のことだと思ってたが違うんか

8 グナマーナ正大師 (sage) 2015/08/01(土) 08:39:15 ID:GN0rzFOs

>>1の再翻訳

唐沢般若心経
孝宏唐沢偶像礼拝者の弁護士無能無能
開示の開示間違え開示IPアドレスクリップ-CLOP
その後、ポスターに核兵器を発射してくるの王国にそれらをブラスト
すべての達人後の教祖が1番であるすべての後の第1号であり、
唐沢五反田うんち機
オウム真理教の弟子、サリン製造業者、浮上
三十万円以下のChinfeを奪っIiniku牛島内部にカミング、
タカヒロはnariyo、Momocloのコンサートに出席するために起こっています
雪KoushinのLawfirmようなプレーンな心
彼の能力を最大限にいくつかの訴訟を扱っ
彼の青年で、彼が何をしたか、すべてのルートだった弟を殺害
「私は無力だ。なぜ私は無力ですか?」それは私が最終的に出会った法律でした。
死んでドロップし、死んで落とし、唐沢、死んでドロップ、死んでドロップし、唐沢
無能クリップCLOP弁護士、唐沢コーランバーナー
父親に依存し、それはぶっきらぼう唐沢が無能で配置します
私は心の底から弁護士として孝宏唐沢の辞任を願っています。

9 グナマーナ正大師 (sage) 2015/08/02(日) 06:22:17 ID:ApM7FPWE

当職もやってみたくナリ、元に近いリズムで歌えることを重視し、原義から外れない範囲で意訳してみました
使える部分があればなりよりです

**** ****, idol addict lawyer, useless useless
Frequent'n'random disclosure, IP crack crack crack crack
Disclosure and then nuke attack, end of fuckin' life
We knew guru's the number one
We knew guru's the number one

****, Gotanda's poop factory,
AUM devotee, sarin producer, levitation master
Snatched three thousand dollars, cummed inside Iiniku
****: "Go for a Momokuro's live NARI"

"With a beautiful mind like young snow," -- Koushin Lawfirm
"I tackle some lawsuit matters with all my best"
"When I was young I killed my bro, the dawn of the grand tale"
"Oh I'm useless" "Why am I useless?" -- Finally he got the power of law

10 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/02(日) 06:33:03 ID:jJRV1oBw

万一ニュージーランドで流行ったら大変ですね…

11 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/02(日) 11:34:55 ID:g3Urrfs2

crackcrackcrackcrackに草

12 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/02(日) 12:35:07 ID:qiE0VArE

>>9の再翻訳
****、アイドル中毒の弁護士、役に立たない役に立ちません
Frequent'n'random開示、IPのヒビ割れのヒビ割れ
開示した後、核兵器の攻撃、fuckinのの最後の生活
私たちは教祖のナンバーワンを知っていました
私たちは教祖のナンバーワンを知っていました

**、五反田の糞工場、
AUM信者、サリンプロデューサー、浮上マスター
Iiniku内部にcummed、3000ドルを強奪
**:「MomokuroのライブNARIのために行きます」

「若い雪のように美しい心で、「 - KoushinのLawfirm
「私はすべての私の最高のといくつかの訴訟の問題に取り組みます」
「私が若かったとき、私は、壮大な物語の幕開けを私の仲間を殺しました」
なぜ無用だ""ああ、私は役に立ちませんよ "?" - 最後に、彼は法律の力を持って

13 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/02(日) 13:43:49 ID:VuPSTmUc

これを足掛かりに恒心教が広く海外に布教されること切に望む

14 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/02(日) 15:30:15 ID:jJRV1oBw

歌は国境を超えます。
世界中の声なき声に力を。

15 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/02(日) 15:48:31 ID:enHJXFLo

My Younger Brother was Vanished
My Younger Brother was Vanished for my surroundings
The Devil was suddenly came and took it

Who killed my younger brother?
Who killed my younger brother?

こっちはマザーグースの歌が元ネタだから作りやすいかも
https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%82%AF%E3%83%83%E3%82%AF%E3%83%AD%E3%83%93%E3%83%B3

16 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/02(日) 15:55:14 ID:crn9UPaY

>>9
これはいい。
「最終的に出会った法律」に続く部分も作っていただけないナリか?

17 グナマーナ正大師 (sage) 2015/08/02(日) 17:19:25 ID:g3Urrfs2

Lang8にぶん投げようと思って忘れてたやつがあったのでここに投棄しておきますを
何かの血となり肉となってくれればなりよりです

"Sonshi Cheering song"
Indeed Sonshi is number one
Indeed Sonshi is number one
Indeed Sonshi is number one
K.R.S.W Sonshi!

18 グナマーナ正大師 (sage) 2015/08/02(日) 17:20:01 ID:g3Urrfs2

"Verses of Confession"
My little brother disappeared,
disappeared from front of me.
Devil was appearing suddenly,
He spirited away my little brother.
 
Who is the person who killed my little brother?
Who is the person who killed my little brother?

Why don't you believe me? Why are you doubting me?
I didn't it, so It's all not my fault.
All of them is devil who is to blame,
I was said by him, "you must whack your brother".

Who is the person who killed my little brother?
Who is the person who killed my little brother?

(It did me, My name is Karasawa Takahiro.)

19 グナマーナ正大師 (sage) 2015/08/02(日) 17:20:57 ID:g3Urrfs2

"The Sonshic Verses"
Karasawa Takahiro was burning a quran while insulting Muhammad.
Karasawa Takahiro was burning a quran while insulting Muhammad.
 
He's hiding out
Aios Gotandaekimae 1008,1-11-1, Nishigotanda, Shinagawa-ward, Tokyo, Japan
Koushin comprehensive lawfirm.

Kill him as soon as you find him.

"KRSW Ondo"
Pakah when you dance a dance
you ought to dance a lawyer ondo, disclosing!
300 thousand of dick face's parents
of dick face of Kokushikan, scamming!

He does nothing and
profiteers
lame duck and idol geek
profiteer

Go to hell KRSW Go to hell KRSW
Go to hell KRSW Go to hell KRSW

Pakah his belly is a little fat
His workings are a little sloppy, IP!
He's intolerant so makes angry about the cards.
Deification,wiki!

Tesuya Bo-bobo
Criminal Umeda
Kurosagi Shishitou

Go to hell KRSW Go to hell KRSW
Go to hell KRSW Go to hell KRSW

20 グナマーナ正大師 (sage) 2015/08/02(日) 17:21:17 ID:JMOHuBrU

"I'm gonna bed downelson"
 
I'm gonna bed downelson
I'm gonna bed downelson
I'll surely bed downelson too today
I'll surely bed downelson too tomorrow

I'm gonna bed downelson
I'm gonna bed downelson
I'm gonna bed downelson too today
I'm gonna bed downelson too tomorrow

mingchieh mingchieh mingchieh
nighty-night nighty-night nighty-ningchieh
milledge milledge milledge
nighty-night nighty-night nighty-nilledge

I yawned, today is the end.
I'll downelson too today, too today.
I'm gonna bed downelson today.
nighty-night nighty-night nighty-nighsumiya

21 グナマーナ正大師 (sage) 2015/08/02(日) 21:50:54 ID:enHJXFLo

The lonely Chinfe

Because can't make relationship as I think in the real world
Results reached internet a place of self-assertion was greed
In general, to enjoy anonymously bulletin board but
Daringly Join with fixity nickname

Since then there became his whereabouts
Even while hated but recognized there
Even it every day to spend lonely at school
But he proudly boast in there

う~ん

22 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/03(月) 01:02:20 ID:EBs0DOsM

>>16
反響がもらえて嬉しいナリ
>>9の続きですを
参考までにどうぞ

**** should die should die
**** must die must die
Useless crack crack lawyer
**** Quran burner
Utterly dependent on his father
Frankly speaking crazy and insane
We sincerely wish **** **** to quit lawyer ASAP


ところで、パカパカをどのように訳すかは難題ナリ
日本語はああいうオノマトペを多く持つのに対し英語では適切な動詞を選ぶことで気分を表現することが多いと聞きます
cracked openなどという表現があるよあなので採用しましたを
crackが適切かどうかは少し怪しいですが、法の力を悪用し一種のクラッキングを行うこととのダブルミーニングと言えるかも知れません

23 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/03(月) 01:59:01 ID:MqJSqjGY

IT系の用語であり本来の開示とはやや意味が異なりますが、unpackはいかがでしょうか?
発音的には「ウンパック(アンパック)」でありパッカやウンコに被せられます。

24 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/03(月) 02:17:04 ID:SfOr406g

unpackは日本語だと展開やな

25 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/03(月) 02:47:40 ID:B91jULpI

いや勉強になったよ、
擬態語を意味も考えつつ訳すというのは非ネイティブには簡単ではないようですね
私見では"パカパカ"という語の持つお間抜けな響きを大切にしたくここはそのまま"pakapaka"とするのが適切だと思います

26 22 2015/08/03(月) 03:10:12 ID:EBs0DOsM

>>23
実はunpackも当職の候補の一つでした
意味が少々変わってしまいますが、unpack unpackと繰り返すとパッカンパッカンみたいな発音になるのが素晴らしいナリね

>>25
確かに、そのままpakapakaとするのが最良な気がします

27 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/03(月) 04:37:24 ID:qCO8tIro

そもそも開示音を「パカパカ」と表記すること自体かなりおかしいわけであって
"unpack"が最適解っぽいような気がする

28 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/06(木) 03:56:18 ID:4XfK3tzs

ジャスティンビーバーのアンチが作る歌のフレーズが参考になりそうナリね

29 グナマーナ正大師 (sage) 2015/08/06(木) 05:03:12 ID:p973P6Mk

unpackunpack…って唄ったらァンパカパカ…
ってなりそうやしunpackいけるやん

30 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/06(木) 10:42:48 ID:4XfK3tzs

当職はあまり英語がうまくないですが、unpackは意味の上で開示感が薄いように思いますを
「packされたもので無くする」というニュアンスで、開封とかカバンの中身を出すとかの日常的、事務的な気分に聞こえます
英語に強芋の解説切に望む

31 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/09(日) 07:45:34 ID:21XoPXQ2

unknown

32 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/09(日) 18:46:02 ID:fMqYDkqw

●Yes.

33 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/10(月) 18:53:02 ID:k26hVVd2

4chに連投しよう

34 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/12(水) 01:17:27 ID:rtHh.kP2

High speed Karasawa tune
 
Karasawa Takahiro useless
Karasawa Takahiro siblicide
Karasawa Takahiro cardboard badge
Karasawa Takahiro sex criminal

Karasawa Takahiro disclosing his anus
Karasawa Takahiro swindler
Karasawa Takahiro loli-con
Karasawa Takahiro black man

Karasawa Takahiro koran burner
Karasawa Takahiro terrorist
Karasawa Takahiro nuke holder
Karasawa Takahiro serial killer

Koushin comprehensive lawfirm has a girl's corpse, which was barbarously murdered by Karasawa Takahiro,and absconder Hasegawa Ryota is hiding out in the building

Kill him as soon as you find him

35 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/17(月) 14:54:48 ID:Ei17Q3dw

●No.

36 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/17(月) 15:49:47 ID:gm3U4keM

それはできるよね。とDo you understand?ってニュアンス似てそう

37 グナマーナ正大師 (sage) 2015/08/17(月) 15:52:46 ID:Ne6CveeM

In how parents, in how family were you grown?
When did you start to do that?
What kind of student were you?
What were you watching in your school days?
What color was the sky?
Have you cried?
What happend to you?
Have you felt to be loved by your parents?
How did you feel when you announced to kill me?
What kind of pleasure did you feel?
Could you look the policemen who came suddenly in the eye?
Did you see your parents' face at that time?
Do you know the grief of your parents?
What did you feel when you were spending the night alone?
What did you feel from persuasion of lawey who defenced you?
What are you feeling now?
Can you feel your parents' feelings?
Are you the person who hurts the other?
Can you kill your parents?
Can people become happy with hurting other?
What are you seeing now?
What color is the sky?
People must love each other.
You must feel to be loved by parents.
Now, your life restarts.
What kind of member of society will you become?
I want you to be not a person who hurts others but a person who helps others.
I'm watching you at 20 years later.

38 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/18(火) 16:14:23 ID:5nOlXfB6

ええ感じに英訳できてきたしあとは編曲して4chanで布教するだけナリ

39 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/20(木) 00:33:53 ID:WeB01GJ6

ニコニコ大百科にて海外仕様横尊師が完成しておりました。
45 : ななしのよっしん :2015/07/07(火) 21:51:31 ID: sw+U0dlInj
ミ[; :つ) ) 当職も海外仕様にしてみたナリ
      でもミとつの代打が無いナリ
50 : ななしのよっしん :2015/08/19(水) 23:36:21 ID: 41L2CyVStE
ミ[; : ɔ) ) Power to the silent voice.
ミ[; : ɔ( ) What the hell? Disclose!Disclose!
51 : ななしのよっしん :2015/08/19(水) 23:48:30 ID: XhrVZK0p5y
Σ[; : ɔ) ) I'll see your 20 years later.
52 : ななしのよっしん :2015/08/20(木) 00:18:09 ID: 41L2CyVStE
Σ[; : ɔ) ) What is the color of sky?
Σ[; : ɔ) ) I want you not to be a person hurting people.
Σ[; : ɔ) ) I want you to be a person helping people.

40 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/20(木) 08:23:53 ID:UUsjaknU

シグマ尊師

41 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/21(金) 02:40:04 ID:KTCf6bX6

読み上げソフトとautotuneでそれっぽくできるでしょうか?

42 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/21(金) 18:46:43 ID:97ysqsEQ

ガバガバ英訳ですがとりとり。

Karasawa Takahiro is idol geek who's shyster, shyster.
Much disclosure and wrong disclosure, IP Paka Paka.
After that, attacks by nuclear weapon, then you will soon die socially.
We know Sonshi is NO.1! We know Sonshi is NO.1!
Karasawa in Gotannda is a shit maker,
a follower of AUM, made Sarin, levitated.
Robbed three million yens, cummed inside Iiniku.
Takahiro goes to Momokuro's concert, nari.
"Pure heart like snow" Koshin Law firm.
We'll do our best to make your some lawsuits better.
When I was young, I lost(killed) my brother, that was all my origin.
"I'm powerless, why am I powerless?" At that time, I came across law.

Karasawa, you have to die. Karasawa, you have to die.
Incompetent Paka-Paka lawyer Karasawa burns Koran.
He's dependent on his father. It's clear that he's incompetent.
Karasawa Takahiro, be disqualified! We really hope that comes true.

43 グナマーナ正大師 2015/08/22(土) 18:43:34 ID:6JHkwEPM

>>42訂正
1行目 Karasawa Takahiro is an idol geek, shyster, shyster.
3行目 After that, attacks by nuclear weapon, and you'll die socially.
6行目 a follower of AUM, makes Sarin, levitates.
7行目 Takahiro goes to a Momokuro's concert, nari.
12行目 "I'm powerless, why am I powerless?" Finally, I came across law.